From the time I started writing my story, I have been concentrating on improving where it lacks human element. This is very difficult to do because of the distance. I am not in China, so I cannot hit the streets to find sources. I have a lot information for the story from the online research that I have done and newspaper articles that I have read about the subject. These articles have helped in the development of the story, but I need more. The story needs an expert’s voice and that’s where the National Jewish Research and Medical Center comes in. I think with their expertise I will be able to give my readers an accurate and convincing news story about the affects of pollution on the human body and most importantly how it may affect athletes’ performances.
So far I was able to get Medical data from the National Jewish Research and Medical Center about the health effects of air pollution on the human respitory system through e-mail. However, I need to speak to a medical expert from the center, so I will continue to call them and ask to speak to someone until I get the help that I need. Fortunately for me, my story is based on an event that has not yet taken place and the pollution issue in China has not been fixed. I can continue to work on it until I write a great story.I also have been trying to get contacts in China. The two girls who I was hoping would help me from the University of Beijing have fallen flat from the surface of the earth. In the beginning, they sounded very promising and I thought I was going to get some great pictures from them, however I have not heard from them in the last two weeks. At this point, I really don’t think they will come through for me. So, what I have done since is that I have e-mailed several universities in the U.S. to try to find contacts. I sent e-mails to the University of Miami, University of Missouri, University of California and University of Florida. I have gotten a response from UM and they put me in contact with their International student and their Exchange student programs to find potential Chinese contacts. I informed them that the contacts do not have to be Chinese. If they have connections with China and live there, I want to talk to them. I spoke to the directors of both of those programs and told them what we are trying to do at our school. They both were very enthusiastic about it and even admit that their university has never done anything like that. They told me that they will contact me sometime this week once they get in touch with potential students. Right now, I am hoping that this works because I have a few other story ideas; however I need contacts to develop them.
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You've really done your research on your subject so it'd be a shame if you can't find characters to go along with the facts. Have you tried contacting American athletes and coaches who will be competing at the Olympics? They've obviously been training under ideal conditions but will they be ready for the air pollution that awaits them in Beijing? How worried are they about the environment they'll be competing in? Was the marathon that you referred to in your story an international marathon? If so, did Americans run in it? Maybe you can find American runners who did and they can give you a first hand account of what they endured.
-Josh
P.S. Sorry for posting my comments so soon. I'll be working non-stop the next two weeks so I had to make my rounds on the blogs as soon as possible.
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"Get off China's Back: We think Beijing's Pollution Tastes Good!"
-Josh
You've done a lot of research and the story is very throughout in explaining the situation, however adding a human element would make it perfect. I understand how hard it is to find people in China that could speak to you, but maybe if you go to a forum related to the Olympics? Or like Josh said, maybe find someone who has been to Beijing recently and could express their views on the topic? The cool thing is that when it comes to pollution anyone can be used as a point of reference because it affects everyone in some level, but an athlete would be best in your case.
I’m sorry I don’t have any real input to help you find people. Like I told you, I used a forum and worked my way from there. It was a travel forum and I can give you the link if you are interested, but I would try to find forums related to your topic instead so that you narrow down your search.
But as it is, your article keep me focused and reading till the end, so you already have something huge going on there.
Good luck,
Jocelynn
Hi =)
You seem very focused and knowledgeable about what you are doing, and what you would like to do, and that is important. As far as your disappearing contacts go, we are all facing that problem. However, I think that you are going about everything in the right way, so just don't lose focus or drive!! =)
Also, even if you can only find one good source to use for this story, even if it is just an expert about China and their environment and they don't even live in China, I think that the human element of your story would be complete. There is going to be a lot of research and data in your story, so just one good source would probably suffice.. (in my opinion)
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